User blog:Sunny Kelin/Chapter 1:G Maiden Review

Welcome to my blog! I will review Chapter 1.

So we see a teenage girl named Serry getting beaten up in the beginning by some boys in her school just because she is weak.. I would call that a bully to the weak. Later she quits her school due to humilation and made herself get lost in the middle of the ocean, that's creepy. Serry later sees an explosion on a building, but later falls asleep? I would have wanted to see what happen after the explosion. She finds a bottle on the morning underneath the sea, and it continues to the night she pick up the bottle and drinks the strange liquid inside it, eww.. I would have checked what it was first. She later has a stomach ache and then.. now the awesome part comes when her body starts growing huge and strong muscles. She was looking pretty awesome now that she is muscular and sexy :P